My essay topic is about the relationship between nationality and identity. The reason why I chose it is because I myself is mixed race person, and I think nationality does a lot to affect you in modifying your identity. It is very interesting that my brother who cannot speak German at all still feels that he is half a Swiss as well as I, who used to speak German fluently, do. The thesis statement is the nationality affects you in modifying your identity.
Hi Nina,
返信削除I like the basic idea of your proposed thesis statement, and I'd like to suggest adding some specifics to it to make it more sharply focused.
A sense of nationality strongly affects the formation of individual identity in several ways, including...
What comes after [...] is given in your Blogging Assignment 2 and of course in your Essay 1 outline.